Best Essays of 2007 SA2

ta-dah.jpg TA-DAH! 

Here they are as promised. There are 26 essays that earned a mark of 23 or above. I will upload them as they are sent to me. I have not done any editing beyond the basic marking for the exam– what you see here is what your friends have typed and sent in. I hope you will read them and learn from them. They are not perfect- there is always room for improvement. But they are largely relevant, fluent, well crafted and interesting. After you read them you might like to leave a comment on this post. Even good writers benefit from encouragement, and I am sure they will be happy to read your responses to their writing.  

girlwriting1.jpgakanksha_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting2.jpgakanksha_situational_sa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting1.jpgeugene_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting3.jpgpriyangha_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting4.jpgshana_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

boy-writing.jpgmengfai_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girl-writing.jpgvanessa_freewritingsa2.doc Family

boywriting2.jpggabriel_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

girlwriting21.jpgjiaher_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting31.jpgjiawei_freewritingsa2.doc Family

boywriting3.jpgandrew_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting5.jpgyeejeng_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a dificult decision to make

boywriting4.jpgboonkiat_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting5.jpgboonkiat_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

girlwriting41.jpgemily_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting51.jpgnurmatha_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria, and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

girlwriting6.jpgnurmatha_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting11.jpghanzi_freewritingsa2.doc Describe your favourite place and explain why this place is special to you

boywriting21.jpgjonathan_freewritingsa2.doc Should school rules be decided by the students? What are your views?

boywriting31.jpgtohnguan_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a decision within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting6.jpgwelon_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

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3 thoughts on “Best Essays of 2007 SA2

  1. For me, i prefer the free writing on post-exam activities by boon kiat and nurmatha. This is because they are very detailed and their solutions are really good and make the whole essay persuasive!

  2. I think you mean Situational Writing. I am so glad you took the time to read them. Yes, I agree with you about Boon Kiat’s and Nurmatha’s essays. Both have very logical ways of approaching these sorts of questions which serve them well in exam situations. Well said, Carina!

  3. Wow, I like the situational writing. They helped me in my writing! I was stuck as i didn’t know what to write (sec 2-style writing…complicated) and decided to do a research on how to write. Glad to see this site! Thx once again!

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