Archive for October 18, 2007

Best Essays of 2007 SA2

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Here they are as promised. There are 26 essays that earned a mark of 23 or above. I will upload them as they are sent to me. I have not done any editing beyond the basic marking for the exam- what you see here is what your friends have typed and sent in. I hope you will read them and learn from them. They are not perfect- there is always room for improvement. But they are largely relevant, fluent, well crafted and interesting. After you read them you might like to leave a comment on this post. Even good writers benefit from encouragement, and I am sure they will be happy to read your responses to their writing.  

girlwriting1.jpgakanksha_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting2.jpgakanksha_situational_sa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting1.jpgeugene_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting3.jpgpriyangha_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting4.jpgshana_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

boy-writing.jpgmengfai_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girl-writing.jpgvanessa_freewritingsa2.doc Family

boywriting2.jpggabriel_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

girlwriting21.jpgjiaher_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting31.jpgjiawei_freewritingsa2.doc Family

boywriting3.jpgandrew_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting5.jpgyeejeng_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a dificult decision to make

boywriting4.jpgboonkiat_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting5.jpgboonkiat_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

girlwriting41.jpgemily_freewritingsa2.doc Write about an occasion when you had a difficult decision to make

girlwriting51.jpgnurmatha_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a discussion within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria, and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

girlwriting6.jpgnurmatha_freewritingsa2.doc Family

girlwriting11.jpghanzi_freewritingsa2.doc Describe your favourite place and explain why this place is special to you

boywriting21.jpgjonathan_freewritingsa2.doc Should school rules be decided by the students? What are your views?

boywriting31.jpgtohnguan_situationalwritingsa2.doc A report on post-exam activities to be submitted to the Principal following a decision within the Student Welfare Committee. The activities had to satisfy 3 criteria and the writer was instructed to highlight possible problems as well as suggest solutions.

boywriting6.jpgwelon_freewritingsa2.doc We learn more out of school than in school. Do you agree?

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