Your little brothers and sisters in Sec One produced some very creative work today. The task was to write acrostic poems. (If you don’t know what this means look it up- or you might be able to guess as you read on. Most of you would have written such poems in Primary school.)
Here are some poems from the students of 1E3 (I will only add their names to this post if they write in and give their consent.)
MAGICIAN
Mesmerizing tricks
Awe is always the reaction
Given the talent
Impossible to learn
Capture all’s attention
Into his magic show
And his magic remains secret
Never to be found.
ROSES
Right gift for a girl
On a special occasion
She will think I’m sweet
Especially after Valentine
Spring season arrives.
MOON
Midst the clouds at night
Often hanging in the sky
Orange in colour at times
Neon to show the way.
WAR
Waiting and watching
Alert at all times
Ready to fight.
GUNS
Garrisoned in a building
Unknown to passersby
Not moving a muscle
Scoping the victim.
CHAOS
Crazy people running,
Havoc wreaked everywhere,
On the edge of destruction,
A hero is needed,
Somewhere, there will be one.
SOCCER
Scoring is the main objective of the game
Offensive and defensive tactics are used in the game
Cards of two colours are used by referees
Clocking goals is the best
Even children love the game
Run around with a ball.
These gems are from the students of 1E2:
PANTHER
Prowling, on the hunt
Alas, the hunt is found
Night, it’s time to feast
Terror, struck in all
Horror, glimpsed in the eyes of the prey
Escape is impossible
Rest in peace.
FISH
Flowing along with the current
Isolated in the big blue sea
Searching for its fellow fishes
Hoping for a glimpse of light.
GIRL
God! Isn’t that girl pretty?
Irritating sometimes
Really knows how to attract boys
Lovely.
HOME
Homeland where I belong
Our heart and soul
Memories formed
Everyday a new beginning.
STARS
Shining and
Twinkling
All night long
Reach out to pick them
Suddenly they are gone.
These are the ones that caught my eye. If you would like to try your hand at acrostic poems, why not send me your attempts? I’d love to add them to this post.
Swiss Cottage Secondary 3 student said,
May 25, 2007 @ 1:26 am
Wow, the poems are very well written.
How I hope I am as good as them!
Thankyou!
'Ndrew said,
May 27, 2007 @ 3:16 pm
Hi Mrs. V! I enjoyed reading all these poems and I have come up with some of my own (pls do comment! =D)
ANDREW
Always deep in thought
Never seemed to be happy
Dividing up the workload,
Restlessly sees that it is terrible
Everyone is so busy
When would we rest?
DANCE
Daring to make a move
Always hesitating.
Not wanting to embarrass oneself
Centre of attention I am not
Enthusiasm still there though (=
CRIME
Cast in a play
Ready to act
It gets too serious
May not be in right mind
Everything has gone beyond limit
One last one before I sleep,
ENGLISH
Everything seems so foreign
Nothing stays the same
Gladly to say
Loving it never changes
Independent learning of it
Seems to difficult
How do I survive?
mrsv said,
May 28, 2007 @ 11:15 am
Yes these are nice ones- thank you for the attempt. The beauty of acrostic poems is the way each line, while starting with a letter of the title word, also has something to do with the title.
mrsv said,
May 28, 2007 @ 11:18 am
I would just like to respond to Swiss Cottage Secondary 3 Student (comment 1)- sorry I didn’t do it earlier. I am sure you are every bit as good as these writers. Don’t be afraid to try. Apathy and fear of failure are the biggest inhibitors of creativity!
Lys said,
July 26, 2007 @ 3:03 pm
Hi Mrs V. After looking at these poems, I came up with these on the spur of the moment. I hope it isn’t too bad. =)
Angel
A helping hand
Never judgemental
Gentle and generous
Ever present and always kind
Loved for who you are.
Life
Long journeys
In search
For the meaning of
Existance
Maths
Maths class again
Attention required, let me search for it
Torturous tedium, someone save me
Hysterical with boredom, someone explain this
Suffering for eternity till the bell rings
-Melissa
3E6
mrsv said,
July 27, 2007 @ 2:04 pm
Are you kidding? Not bad at all! These are beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing them with us.
dinorah said,
September 1, 2008 @ 10:13 pm
I want an acrostic for independence day
mrsv said,
September 2, 2008 @ 1:49 am
Here is an acrostic poem for Independence Day. The only problem is that I have no idea which country you are from or what your own feeling about your country is. So this is a sort of generic poem on the subject, but also, it is what I feel about mine!
I dream of freedom
No barriers between us
Dream of a land like ours
Everywhere they go
People embracing hope
Every chance they get
Dancing with destiny
Every moment of their lives
No dream unrealized
Children sing out loud
Enjoying their childhood
Dream of such things
And they will come true
Yes, they have come true
Arjun said,
September 2, 2008 @ 11:41 am
WOW!
That’s soooo touching… Drop! (Those are tears)
Thank you,
Arjun
Rishi said,
September 2, 2008 @ 11:41 am
Nice!
Amanda Jarvis said,
October 8, 2008 @ 4:49 am
Does anyone know how I can use WOW like the poems above? Thanks so much!!
mrsv said,
October 8, 2008 @ 7:26 am
Hi Amanda, I’m not sure if I have understood your question correctly, but if you are asking for an acrostic poem using the word ‘Wow’, here is one you could use:
W- Wonder of wonders
O- Only days left until
W- Woman inherits the earth
This is just off the top of my head, and I don’t actually subscribe to the sentiment. But you have to admit it sounds pretty cool!
masya said,
November 6, 2008 @ 8:42 pm
hy amanda،this is just words from my mind .
w: war is not good
o: our effect is to make peace
w: withe making peace we will have a wenderful life
masya said,
November 6, 2008 @ 8:46 pm
I went an acrotice about freedom . Help me please…
Thanks
mrsv said,
November 11, 2008 @ 2:57 am
Hmm…
F- Far and away
R- Roaming over hill and dale
E- Ever floating among the clouds
E- Eagles and seagulls are my companions
D- Dreamtime in the center of my mind
O- Out of reach from the clutches of adulthood
M- My spirit flies free
masya said,
November 13, 2008 @ 2:34 pm
oh! thanks …… you are wonderful…………….. i love you
mrsv said,
November 13, 2008 @ 2:38 pm
I’m not going to argue with you there!
masya said,
November 13, 2008 @ 2:40 pm
an ather one about peace…. please …..this is for an aplication
thanks
mrsv said,
November 13, 2008 @ 2:44 pm
Hey! Writing these is not that hard. You might have fun trying to do it on your own.
P- please stop the fighting
E- enough hate exists in the world
A- are we going to destroy each other
C- can we learn to live together
E- even though we are different?
Kayla said,
November 19, 2008 @ 10:27 pm
wow that was very cool could you do one for the word Tolerance?
cowley said,
December 3, 2008 @ 11:44 pm
i need help on a acrostic poem about freedom
mrsv said,
December 8, 2008 @ 4:58 pm
Check out comment #15 above.
mrsv said,
December 8, 2008 @ 5:02 pm
T- take a stranger
O- over all your differences
L- leave aside fear
E- engage in dialogue
R- really connect
A- allow for individual beliefs
N- no need to think the same way
C- care about the stranger
E- eventually make him a friend
Dion said,
January 11, 2009 @ 10:40 pm
I really need an acrostic for the name Dion Brown
mrsv said,
January 12, 2009 @ 1:43 pm
I really need a break from writing acrostic poems!
ZACK said,
January 26, 2009 @ 4:06 am
I liked your chaos acrostic, do you have any other poems on chaos?
Amanda hensley said,
January 30, 2009 @ 4:41 pm
hi i need help writing and acrostic poem for my name. Can any one help?
RV said,
February 12, 2009 @ 2:01 am
TML (32), Sec 1E9
GUNS
Garrisoned in a building
Unknown to passersby
Not moving a muscle
Scoping the victim.
I like the poem on Maths by Melissa because that is exactly how I feel about Maths. I feel like I can’t wait for the lesson to be over. The bell is my saviour as well.
bill said,
February 15, 2009 @ 9:44 pm
i need help write a acroticpeom for black sabbath
mrsv said,
February 15, 2009 @ 11:06 pm
You’re going to have to write it yourself. I know very little about sabbath- black or otherwise.
choonzin said,
February 16, 2009 @ 1:49 pm
Mrs V ,
when did we ever write poems ?
choonzin said,
February 16, 2009 @ 1:53 pm
oops , i forgot to look at the date . 2007 . haha .
mrsv said,
February 16, 2009 @ 2:23 pm
Actually I was afraid there would be some confusion- but I’m glad you were so observant! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!
Jonas Hii said,
March 1, 2009 @ 7:15 am
L – Left for you to decide its future
I – Infinite possibilities
F – Full of ups and downs
E – Ecstasy and excitement awaits
mrsv said,
March 1, 2009 @ 11:02 am
Very nice one, Jonas! And also very relevant to the topic word.
yoo euna said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:41 pm
BOOK
By the river
Old lady stands
Old, very old, lady
Keep holding on to her precious book
DNg said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:41 pm
Wow! These poems are really well-written.
yoo euna said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:46 pm
Candy
Candy,my favourite
And my freshment
No matter what
Daddy says,
You are my love candy
I really liked the TOLERANCE.It really explained how to tolerate situations and people.
KvT said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:47 pm
KvT (36), 1E5
LIGHT
L-Lead our way out
I- Is irreplaceable
F- Found almost everywhere
E- Enable us to see and do things
I like the one on CRIME by Ndrew. Its very interesting really tells the meaning of crime.
Ayhz said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:51 pm
AYHZ(2),SEC 1E3
STAR
Standing together in a nice way
Trying to give out as much light as they can every night
Always there at night
Really thats so bright!
Alicia Tan (: said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:52 pm
Alicia Tan (1), Sec 1E2
SONGS
S – So hard to resist
O – Opens up your mind
N – Needed for relaxation
G – Geeks LOVE it too!
S – Something which holds a special meaning
I like the poem by Jonas Hii as it is really true and nice words are used such as ‘Ecstasy’ which brings up the mood of the poem(:
Quek Hui Ying said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:53 pm
QHY(33) Sec 1E4
DEATH
D- Does not have any mercy.
E- Every living -thing would encounter it.
A- Always happening evey second of the day.
T- Time of leaving.
H- Has always been a thing many peolpe try to avoid.
Mohit said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:54 pm
MR (21), Sec 1E2, SCSS
FAMILY
Fatherly Love
Aiways Together
Motherly Love
I Will Always Remember
Love Which Will Never Lessen
Yesterday,Today or Tomorrow,They Will Always Share Their Sorrow
I love the poem on soccer as it reflects the actual game.
DGZH (7) 1E3 said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:55 pm
BARREL
Big to carry drinks,
Able to withstand high falls
Ready with spare food to supply everyone when there is drought
Ready wit beer for sea sick pirates
Enables sea sailors to enjoy delicious whisky
Letting themselves to be drunk.
Koh Eun said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:55 pm
KE(13)1E1
nap
Nylon blanket covered me,
And I feel asleep
Please do not wake me up!
I like the poem “home” because it is what I feel about the home too
and aslo it is true that we make memories from our home
HWH 1E5 said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:56 pm
Fancy as I always see
Amazing Things
Not as true as they can be
The dreams I wish will linger on
And stay
Surreal and
Yet so real
C S(31),1e3 said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:58 pm
After reading all the poems , I decided to create my own. I think … mine’s the worst.
READ
Reading peacefully
Enjoying words
All in a book from
Day to night
ALONE
All by yourself
Leaves you empty
On your very own
No one to be with
Everyday is lonely
Well , I like all the poems above as they are really enjoyable especially the one about peace.
Stingray said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:58 pm
RLRH (30), S1-E3
PLANET
Passing by the sun
Leaving our view
And hiding itself
Not showing again
Till later
I came up with this in a minute. I’m still a little sleepy, but I’m doing a better one later on. This is just so that I completed the English e-learning.
I like the poem on tolerance. It really shows the true meaning of tolerance.
By the way, it’s alright for any teachers to see our class’ website or blog.
HWH 1E5 said,
March 12, 2009 @ 11:59 pm
I like the poem on ANGEL.
People often think that angels are helpful.
Even if someone who came here didn’t know the meaning of what an angel is, by reading the poem, they would already have a vague idea of it.
C S(31),1e3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:00 am
(add to above)
The poembrought peace to my mind too.
Stingray said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:01 am
Mrs V, I posted it a 7:58 am but it’s stated as 11:58 pm!
[i]If you want to see the class website, just click on my name[i]
Stingray said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:01 am
So sad, I can’t type in italic!
Muhd Hani 1e3 (21) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:02 am
Hey MrsV!!!
I have an acrostic poem. Mind to read it?
WOMEN.
W – We, men, love them.
O – On boring days, we need them.
M – Men, like us, ‘colour’ them
E – Emotional at times but we want them.
N – No one can ever replace them.
hwee sin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:02 am
SHS (33), Sec 1E5
COMPUTER
Competing with one another
Opponent almost won
Making a cup of tea
Putting it on my table
Understanding the strategic
Trying hard to win
Every second counts now
Restlessly sitting back as I won
I like the poem on Angel by Melissa as I think that it is very relevant to the topic and it should be true.
Stingray said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:03 am
Why isn’t there a chat widget?
Darren said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:03 am
WDLD(32)1E2
FRIENDS
Fun to play with
Respect each other
Interect with each other
Enjoy playing together
Never hurt your friends
Don’t lie to them
Supportive to you always
I like the one about magician as i really lke magic and mysteries
Chee Hwee Sin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:03 am
MT(4)1E4
FATE
F- Feel that you are poor
A- and are unable to become rich
T- That is your fate which you cannot change
E- Even if you tried harder to change your fate
Xunter said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:04 am
CXY 1E2 (6)
Here goes nothing…
D – death is like a black lion
E – entering and taking spirits
A – always on the prowl
T – to take one’s life
H – hoping and hoping to be full
______________________________
A – always filled with laughter
B – but knows how to be serious
I – insight he has
D – darkness he has not
U – united with his classmates
R – ready to make friends
(Abidur is a friend of mine)
_____________________________
L – Lucus is my best friend
U – usually a little crazed
C – conscious of everyone
U – united we stand
S – separated we fall
(Lucus is another friend of mine)
I like the poem about Magician as despite the fact that there are so many letters, it still stayed on the correct topic.
Muhd Hani 1e3 (21) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:04 am
I like the peom by Jonas.
Its auite true about life.
Denise teh said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:06 am
DT(9),sec 1e4
To my lovely dear friend Jeslyn,
Jeslyn
J-joyful as can ever be
E-enchanting in each of your every ways
S-so cute and beautiful
L-lovey and kind every single day
Y-your smile always brings me through the days
N-and you are my best friend!
Joy Tan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:06 am
JTSM (15) 1E3
HELP
Hanging on to every glimpse of hope I have
Everything would change if I didn’t
Lost but really hoped to be found
Panicking on this remote island
I like Melissa’s poem about Life. It really explains life having long and tedious journeys to come to one point – is there really existence? Although it may be very short, but, who said long poems were supposed to have more meaning than short ones? This poem really made me ponder about existence…( e.g. aliens, ghosts )
Yau Wee Nee said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:06 am
YWN (34) 1E2
SMILE
Sweet
Mellow
Irritating at wrong times
Let’s spread the joy
Everybody smile!
I like the poem on Freedom by Mrs V as it describes the way I feel about the word ‘freedom’. I wish my spirit could fly free too!
Tan Ren Tak,35,1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:08 am
TIME
The world is always alived,
It is full of life,
Many died as time passed,
Even the strongest of all
shawn said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:11 am
i enjoy reading the acrostic poems here.
SPORTS
Something whichkeeps us fit
Prevents us from falling sick
Or a day of play and kick
Remembering of our coach who
Teaches us the skills we need
Soccer is one of them
DKIID said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:12 am
Sebastian Koh(16), sec 1E3
LOVE
Love is a beautiful thing on earth
Only someone who is truly in love will realise that.
Valentines day is a day used to bring out its meaning and
Especially when it comes, couples will be very happy.
I like the poem on Life by Jonas because I feel that life is really like that, with full of ups and downs and it is also left for us to decide its future.
Patricia said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:13 am
WRITE
With the hands
Right words
In ink
Tend to make mistakes
Enthusiasm will soon come from it
abid0123 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:13 am
MAR (20) , 1E2
gymnastics
Going for the gold
You know you
Might
Not win. Those endless hours
At the gym
Starting your body to work hardest.
The excitement and nerves at the meet; the joy when you land on your feet.
It’s hurry and do your home work; it’s eating your supper in the
Car. It’s the love of the
Sport and the Olympic dream.
I like mrsv said’s about PEACE becuase the poem utterly describes the meaning of it
serenity said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:15 am
SC (24), S1E2
HOMEWORK
Having fun in school?
Of course not!
My mother asked me what have learnt in school
Everything suddenly went blank
Wanted to go and play
Outside with my friends
Running and laughting with them
Kill me please,for my homework is not done yet!
I like the poem on freedom that Mrs V wrote. It is a really nice poem for it is what i wanted to experience, expecially the line”Out of reach from the clutches of adulthood”. And most importantly,there would not be homework there!
Patricia said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:16 am
ARZP index 01 class 1e1
Steph said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:16 am
SAF(26), Sec 1E2
NIGHT
Nightime comes after day
It’s special as it’s the time for sleeping
Gone is the light, and here comes the pitch darkness
Having the perfect environment for sleeping
Talk no more and go to sleep
I like the poem on Life by Jonas, because the words he uses are true. So whenever something bad happens, don’t give up because “Ecstasy and excitement awaits”.
Lim Jun :iamg said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:16 am
I like the poem on soccer because the writer uses only six sentence and he can describe everything about soccer and i also love the game.
CCL(3) 1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:18 am
MOTHERS
Mothers are
Overflowing with love and care
They are always there in times of need
Her words soothe the the raging heart of her children and
Elated are her offspring at the sight of her beauty
Rest comes from the Mothers, from their peace
So do not take them for granted for they may some day leave
I quite like Jonas’ acrostic poem because it really gives me a realistic definition of life.That is exactly how I feel about the ways of life.Life is just like a rocky road!
SitiNabila said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:21 am
SNR(34),Sec 1E4
LOVE
Like taking the stairs
One step at a time
Very tiring
Even so,it can be fun
I like the poem LIFE by Jonas as it motivates me.I’ll work hard to feel the ecstasy and excitement.One part of the poem also describes my life.
Moulee (28) 1E2 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:24 am
Nice poem! can’t decide which i like the most.
Friends
Friends are there
Ready to lend a hand
I am happy to have them
Even if we fight.
Never have they forgotten my birthday nor have I
Days passes, night passes
Still, true friends stay with me forever.
li ying said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:25 am
CLY (9), Sec 1E1
FRIENDS
For comforting you when you are sad
Revealing your secrets to your best friend
Idle and giggle about little things
Everything you had is in pink
Never hesitate to do daring things
Do not be afraid to tell your friend
something you had always wanted to tell them
I like the poem on roses as it really reflects what a girl’s personality is. Girls like roses, because it is romantic, becuase it is nice recieving flowers from someone. It makes her feel really special.
ktgn said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:25 am
very good
TJY (1E5) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:26 am
Hi MRS V, this is my acrostic poem…:D
[WISH]
W-wondering
I-In deep thoughts
S-Somethings rarely happened
H-High hops for it.
I hope you could comment on it. Thanks:D!
I really like the poem on magician as the writer stated almost every characteristics about a magician!! Its really interesting to read it.
Francis said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:26 am
I- In the Ocean it lives
C- Could also live in lakes
H- Has many scales
T- Totally cool
H- Hates the land
Y- Yes, its very tasty
S- Swims faster than you or me
PS ICHTHYS means fish in Greek
PSS Great poem Jonas
TWY (27) 1E2 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:27 am
Revolutionary product
Uber good
Best on earth
Internationally known
Knife sharp
Super fun
Seah Chang wee said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:28 am
CLASS
C – Can’t stop learning
L – Learning and asking must be together
A – After asking , must study
S – Studying peacefully
S – Success would be yours
I like mrsv poem on peace , I wish there really is peace in the world .
Joshua Ho said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:28 am
The poems are very well constructed and well-written.You have done a good job making the first letter of every line of the poem form a word.
winston said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
LHSW (22), SEC 1E5
SCHOOL
S – Skiving, talking, waiting to go home,
C – Crying whining at the amount of work,
H – How do life go on?
O – Oh why are we placed in this chamber of boredom?
O – Oh why are we not given the freedom we need?
L – Looking, watching the clock, yay! it is time to go home!
I liked the poem about life that Jonas Hii has written. I think the poem is very true and meaningful. It quite real as life is full of ups and downs. And we will never know what will come next, so life is exciting and fun!
LS (16) 1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
Nature
No sign of unsettlement
A peaceful thing
Tireless and beautiful
Underneath it all, life
Relaxing yet
Energetic
I like the poem by Lys (comment 5) which talks about an angel. It shows that an angel is good, kind and sweet and also shows how to be an angel, in a way.
Vesali said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
School
Super fun
Cool Friends
Homework Palace
Open place
Original Talents
Like you wish
Tan Ren Tak,35,1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
TIME
The world is always alive,
It is full of life,
Many died as time passed,
Even the strongest of all
Chloe Sim said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
Chloe Sim (5) , 1E2
FLY
Fluffy white wings
Lead me through the skies
Yup! its only a dream
I like what melissa worte about ANGEL. the way she describe it was so pure,so innocent and so angelic.
Sec 1 student said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:30 am
Trains
T- Travelling day and night
R- Ready to go
A- Alighting passengers
I- Incredible speed
N- Next station
like the poem on Maths by Melissa because that is exactly how I feel about Maths. I feel like I can’t wait for the lesson to be over. It seems like eternity before the bell actually rings.
♥} XinHui said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:32 am
- GRILL-
G – greasy and
R – ready
I – intoxicating aroma
L – lingers in the atmosphere
L – licking my lips, I prepare for ribs.
Ng Rui Ying said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:34 am
NRY (26) 1E4
Flowers
F- Flowers usually are nice-smelling
L- Looking good, roses are one of my favourite
O- Overtime, you will find them more interesting
W- Without them, you won’t get to have honey
E- Every flower is perfect
R- Ready to explore them?
S- So, what are you waiting for?
I like the poem on Angel from Melissa as what she wirtes perfectly match what I think of an angel.
PRADHYUMNA said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:37 am
PENS
People write with,
Easy to take around,
Notes are taken with,
Sounds easy.
I like the one on stars as it shows really adout stars. When we try to catch them, we cannot catch them as they are hanging high up in the sky.
ChingYingJie_1E4_(5) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:37 am
I feel that the oiems are really good and mostly are relevant to the words.
Fighting for the ball
Looking out for teammates
One more minute to go
Only one point more
Reacting as fast as we could
dom said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:37 am
dlzt(007), sec 1E2
Bata(it is a brand of shoes)
Bata shoes are nice
And some are really unique
though they are too expensive
at times i do buy them
hahaha said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:37 am
NKH (25) sec 1E3
SLEEP
S- snoring loudly, in deep sleep
L- left alone with nobody to disturb
E- everyday, every night it has to be done
E- energised and ready the next morning
P- peacefully, soundly drift off to dreamland…
i like the poem on magicians as i feel that the writer really describes about what they do. the words used are also very creative. and they never give away their secrets.
GTYX(12)Sec1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:39 am
SUN
S- Shining brighly
U-Up in the sky
W-Warm on my skin
I like jonas’ poem as it is very creative and lively. I hope I could write like him.
Lim Jun Liang said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:41 am
Lim Jun Liang(20)1E4
GOAL
Get the ball
Offensive
Aim
Let the ball go into the net
I like the poem on soccer because the writer uses only six sentence and he can describe everything about soccer and i also love the game.
Irtiyah said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:41 am
NI (26), Sec 1E3
RAINBOW
Raindrops
Against the window
Its beautiful sound
Naturally
Bend of colours
Overshadow the beauty
Within me
I like the poem titled Fish as it reminds me of my first day at primary school. I felt lost like how it is decribe in the poem. I also desperately need some hope to go on with my school life.
ChingYingJie_1E4(5) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:41 am
I feel that the poems are really meaningful .
F – ighting for the ball
L – ooking out for sticks
O – ne minute left
O- ne nore goal to score
R – eacting as fast as we could
B – eing as quick as we could
A – ll that left is one goal
L – eft for us to shoot
L – eaving th court with smiles is all that we hope
public said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:41 am
testing
brendan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:41 am
EARTH
Everyone’s home
All should do a part
Reuse,reduce,recycle
Time to do our part
Hope for the next generation
.:lIyAANA said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:42 am
Hmmmm………….. very nice poems. somehow,i kinda like it as it has a lot of feelings and emotions when reading them. t Can you try to make an acrostic poem that will improve the attitude of teenagers Mrs v?????????
GTYX(12)Sec1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:42 am
SUN
S-Shining brightly
U-Up in the sky
N-Night falls and day comes
I like jonas’ poem as it is very cretive and lively. I hope I could write like him. (Sorry the poem above was incorrect)
mango said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:43 am
TWY (36), SEC 1E4
SANDI
S-sweet and loving ,that’s what she is
A-also, she’s the one that makes me laugh
N-never forget that she’s an important friend
D-don’t ever try to make her sad
I- I love her as my friend forever and always!!
I like CHAOS because it really describe how chaos is like as a acromatic poem… It is also very creative and fresh and so I like it the most among them all.
Bill Lim Tao Xuan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:45 am
PEN
Press for ink
Evolved from brushes
Needs refills
.:lIyAANA_1E5_(26) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:46 am
Please…… I want to improve myself from joining the wrong company
Mr Boy said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:48 am
PKTD(32),Sec 1e4
MOUSE
May be someone’s pet
One of the zodiac animals
Utterly cute to the owner
Searching for the hidden food
Eating with pleasure
I like the poem on SOCCER because it tells about the main objective and the two tactics in the game. I think it is being written very well.
Devin Tan 8 1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:48 am
M any mysteries to be unravelled .Youngsters, yearning for answers
S leuths, suspecting suspicious people
T errible thieves, taking treasures
E veryone exploring everywhere
R obbers, regretting their own actions
Y es! It may all seem so weird but even robbers are regretting their own actions
LWH(18)1E2 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:48 am
ERP
Everyday its standing there
Ready for work
People get frustrated as they forgot their cashcard
I like dom poem
Gansunchin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:48 am
Here is mine
Everybody lives here
All of us lives here
Right place for us to live
The only place we can live
How is our future going be?
Arik Yeo said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:50 am
Dictionary
Dictates almost every word
Induces meanings
Causes our brains to know more words
Takes out question marks from our brains
Indulges our compositions
On the piece of paper
N’ gets no red marks on our exams
Aand gets us to pass our english with flying colours
Really, it works
Y’ don’t you try it?
Devin Tan 8 1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:50 am
very nice poem by the way
Arik Yeo said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:51 am
oh yeah I” from 1E11, 4
Tan Ren Tak,35,1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:51 am
TIME
The world is always alive,
It is full of life,
Many died as time passed,
Even the strongest of all
The poems are very interesting.
FWX_(10)_sec1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:52 am
Blows everything up
Only those far enough
May have a chance of survival
But
Some people didn’t survive
Ameline10 1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:52 am
Hi Mrs V. I thought that your blog is a poem galley…Haha. I have come up with a acrostis poem. It’s very short.
Words
W- When you write
O- On a paper or
R- Read or speak, you
D- Do realise words are
S- So important
This is for e-learning day 3
Jasmine Wong said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:52 am
Learning
Look at those words!
Everything can be learned
As soon as you learn it, use it.
Reading is a form of learning.
Never to late to learn.
It is fun and useful for future
Never says ‘no’ to anyone.
Grandpa, grandma, everyone is learning!
Jasmine(39) 1e3
Lei Lei(8),1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:52 am
Games
G-ood for us to play for awhile
A-s it takes us to another world where fantasy comes alive
M-orning till night
E-ven during midnight,she plays
‘S-witch off the computer!’ her mother would yell.
GAME OVER
I think the ‘Freedom’ poem which was written by Mrsv is nice.Sometime, I also feel like floating in the air for get out of my duties or some other rules.
Jasmine Wong said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:55 am
I really like the poem- Floorball as it is really relevant to floorball and has very meaningful truth for the floorball players.
jia wen said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:57 am
Cool,i really like the poems. It looks fun! Looks foward to try
CWL (5) 1E3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:57 am
CHAIR
Comfortable to sit on
Hard
And Soft
Intelligently designed
Rest on it and you would soon fall asleep
LKWB (19) 1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:58 am
Vampires
V icious
A lways blood-thirsty
M yth
P eople fear them
I deal hunters
R ise from the dead
E xist in your dreams
Toh Ding Xiang said,
March 13, 2009 @ 12:59 am
TDX(38),S1E5
TECHNOLOGY
Technology is everywhere
Examples are computer,air conditioner and so on
Cannot live without it
Hasty advancements
Never slow down in advancements
Ordinary activities such as cooking also requires the usage of it
Life has become simpler because of it
Oftenly used to create weaponery for waging wars
Good and bad to us
Years are not taken to travel from one place to another
I like the poem on LIFE by Jonas Hii as he described the process of life correctly.Life is your’s and if you do not decide your own future,who will?Life is also full of infinite possibilities.When Singapore gained independence,people said that we will not survive but miraculosly,we did and we are a prosperous nation nowadays.Life is also full of ups and douwns.For instance,one might do well in an examination but in the next one,he or she might not do that well as the previous one.Life is also full of fun and excitment.
Le Xuan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:00 am
LLX (17) Sec 1E2
SMILE
Say hello to everyone in the
Morning, when
In the
Library, classroom or in the hall in school
Everyone does the same – SMILE!
I like the poem about English by ‘Ndrew,
as I do like English, but sometimes, it’s really difficult
and hard to understand.
hao ze said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:00 am
i like the poem on magician as the words really reflects what magicians does and what they make us feel.
NZY(27),1E4 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:01 am
MAPLE
M-ixing with people all over the country
A-ssociate with many different kinds of people
P-eople with different levels can meet together
L-evel up by training characters
E-fficient and veri fun
LKWB (19) 1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:02 am
i like the one on life. It’s exactly my perception on life and it’s creative and original.
s.a.n.d.i said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:02 am
s.a.n.d.i (10) Sec, 1E4
Friend
F – Forever there for you,
R – Right there beside you.
I – I can see the future, where our
E – Everlasting friendship
N – Never end. but
D – Don’t worry though – they’ll always be there for you. (:
– I like the poem on LIFE by Melissa as it speaks out my feelings – how tiring how life is, especially when your friends are away.
Sharlene said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:02 am
Sharlene (20), Sec 1E1
S – studying in a classroom
C – chatting with our friends when the teachers are not in
H – having fun when it is time
O – optimistic learning attitude towards our studies
O – overwhelming with students always
L – leaving with full of knowledge everyday
I like the poem on Life by Jonas Hill as i feel that life is like what he describes, full of ups and downs, ecstasy and excitement awaits as we will never know what is in store for us.
jia wen said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:03 am
mok jia wen 24 1E5
Wish to have a new handphone,
I may be greedy but maybe a psp too
So may i wish for somemore?
Hiking at Mount Everest willl be my best wish!
1e3 student said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:05 am
AJX(1) 1e3
LOST
L-lost in the midst of wandering and is now
O-on the verge of crying
S-settle down quickly
T-to think calmly
Love the poem on magician although its long but its well written and depicts the meaning of the word well
Savita Gunasekaran said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:06 am
But i’ve nothing to do
Only sitting and starring at thin air
Ready to do something – but what
Everytime I feel this way and I
Don’t know why
I personally like the poem Life by Jonas because the word Life may be short but it has alot of meaning in it. His poem is also realevent to the word.
Lee Wai Kit(17)1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:06 am
INFOCOMN
I-I love computer games.
N-No to other cca
F-Fine computers to play
O-Oh,how nice can this be
C-Computers,i love it!
O-Oh,we are going to win all the competitions
M-M
Ong Li Wei said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:06 am
OLW (28) Sec 1E3
STARS
Shining high up in the night sky
Together they look wonderful
Alone makes it dull
Readily to perform for their audience to admire at night
Stars are uniquely beautiful in their own way
Blade said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:06 am
YBRA (35) Class 1E2
BOWLING
Best if you can get a strike
Of course it would make the game much more fun
When you bring your friends to play with you
Leaving the lane with no more pins
It would bring a smile to your face
No doubt it is an expensive game
Gutter is what bowlers hate
CE said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:07 am
CEJW (8), Sec 1E2
DOGS
D – Daring little ones, they are.
O – Other than lazing around, they are also great companions.
G – Going around the household to check on their humans’ feelings, seeing if they can help to improve it.
S – Settling down at dusk, they close their eyes to nap, cuddling close to their beloved humans.
I liked Mrs V.’s poem on Tolerance, it would be a very big help to people with low tolerance level, like me.
CEJW said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:08 am
CEJW (8), Sec 1E2
DOGS
D – Daring little ones, they are.
O – Other than lazing around, they are also great companions.
G – Going around the household to check on their humans’ feelings, seeing if they can help to improve it.
S – Settling down at dusk, they close their eyes to nap, cuddling close to their beloved humans.
I liked Mrs V.’s poem on Tolerance, it would be a very big help to people with low tolerance level, like me.
jia wen said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:08 am
mrsv, what do you think of my poem?
a.a.b.r (2) 1e2 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:09 am
Hell will rose
Anger does not fade
Time goes
Everytime you hate
I likes mrsv’s poem on independance day.Its very strong in some ways(I think).
Y.T 1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:09 am
Life never ends
Instead, it continues
Forever, in a never ending cycle where
Everything is decided for us
I liked the poem about the Earth as it sends an important message to save the Earth which is what we should do as, if the Earth is destroyed, so will we.
Tan Ren Tak,35,1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:10 am
I like the poem on SUN-it describes about the sun
Le Xuan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:12 am
FAMILY
Father
And
Mother
I
Love
You
Is this an acrostic poem?
hmmm…
shaun tan de jun said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:12 am
Prepare
Preparing for exams
Ready to take them
Everything is going to be fine
Prepare what you need
And be ready
Remember what you studied
Everthing would be fine
Lee Wai Kit(17)1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:12 am
FUN
F-Funny,
U-Untolerable,it is the holidays!
N-No to CCAs
I like the poem PEN as it describes a pen very much.It is very creative and i really liked it very much.
PEIyi--22--1E3x said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:13 am
TIME
T- Tick tock Tick Tock.
I- It keeps on going.
M- Minutes, hours, days, years..
E- Everyday without rest.
Ong Li Wei said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:20 am
OLW (28) Sec 1E3
STARS
Shining high up in the night sky
Together they look wonderful
Alone makes it dull
Readily to perform for their audience to admire at night
Stars are uniquely beautiful in their own way
I like the poem Melissa came up with titled ‘Angel’ as I believe that angels will lend a helping hand to people who are in need of help.
Krishan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:20 am
vkcv (36), sec 1e1
Friendship
F- friends forever is what they say,
R- respecting more along the way.
I- inspiration it may seem,
E- everlasting it can be.
N- never forgetting each other,
D- doing good to one another.
S- sharing the best things in life,
H- helping each other through thick and thin
I- in every way possible.
P- promising each other a bright future ahead.
someone... said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:25 am
hi, mrs.v! i don’t really have a good poem in my head but i came up with this:
LAUGHTER
Lots of friends around
Always forgive and forget
Usage of happiness
Great to relieve stress
Hop around with joy
Trust in friends
Enthusiastic
Roll on the floor laughing
hihi said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:28 am
eh why can i see until my poem?
someone... said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:34 am
oh, i forgot to leave a comment. i think that the poem titled “LIFE” is one very good poem as it has very describtive words used to describe the happenings in our lives.
V.Pranav(29)1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:35 am
D angling from the ear of a rich lady.
I n the world, diamonds are the hardest to break.
A vailable mostly in the diamond mines in Johannesburg, South Africa.
M y favourites are only diamonds.
O nly rare people have diamond eyes.
N othing is equal to diamond
D azzling everyone who sees it.
S parkling in the night, when the moonlight shines on it.
ChengTing said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:36 am
TCT (36), Sec 1E4
LOLLIPOP;
L- love to eat it frequently,
O- only that i will damage my teeth.
L- like the sweet taste of it,
L- love the feeling of it.
I- includes a lot of flavours.
P- powerful sensation,
O- on the outside,
P- plus, the unforgettable taste.
I like the poem, STARS, although they seem short, but the lines written describes stars well.
V.Pranav(29)1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:37 am
very unique poems….like mine….
Wanying said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:37 am
TWY (36), SEC 1E4
Re-submit: FAMILY
F-Forever united and together
A-Always loving and sharing towards one another
M-Maybe sometimes fights and quarrels will occur but
I-I know that they will get back together again very soon as
L-Love ones are the most precious people in life
Y-You should never ever take them for granted.
I like CHAOS because it really describe how chaos is like as a acromatic poem… It is also very creative and fresh and so I like it the most among them all.
Madeline said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:37 am
MKXM(18) Sec 1e3
FRIENDSHIP
Friendship that lasts
Really long
I tresause them
Ensuring that it don’t go wrong
Now the problem comes
Down right down in our heart, that was what me and her felt
Sometimes she’s irratating but sometimes she’s great
Hope that she undersatnds that
I love her as my friend
Putting in her in my heart, I’ll remember her always.
I like CHAOS the best as I felt that as it really respresented the scene of a classroom when no teacher is around. It also tells us that in every situation, a leader is needed so as to control and manage the situation.
Rachel (30)_1e5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:38 am
NEMO~
Name of my doggie
Expected to be a name of a fish
Making it so special , the
One and only =]
Ang Zhenming :P said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:40 am
class 1e2 ( 3 )
Valentine Day
Vacancy to partner at times.
Abandoned by them too.
Laborious to patch together.
Everything has just gone waste in the end.
Nothing lesser then a thousand times must be said for us to absorb.
Though we always fall out.
In the end we will patch together again.
Nothing could stop us from falling out and patching back again.
Everything is the same.
Dainty in every move we take.
And we will be a normal couple.
Yeah! We will be a great couple on a special day.
Pardon me if I choose the wrong words.
chai min wei said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:41 am
chaiminwei_1e2(4)
ICE CREAM
Icy in the inside
Cold in the outside
Edible on every side
Cry for it
Run for it
Eat it fast
And you get brain freeze
My favorite snack
Gladys Chua said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:43 am
GCYC(12), Class 1E1
Hearts
Hatred is the opposite
Everytime sweet
A shape of love
Really does everything
To give your heart to someone
Specially your beloved, would be the most touching.
I really like Li Ying ’s poem on friends(#36) as it really expresses the way i feel for my friends.The things mention are really what friends do and the poem gives a sort of comfort and pleasant feeling to me.
YiMin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:43 am
TYM(39), Sec 1e5
SCHOOL
Second home for us.
Canteen is always the best.
Hall the largest.
Oops, forgot my homework again.
Ouh-oh, talk too much in class.
Late people will be punished.
I like EARTH by brendan. It include the 3Rs rules and also it relate to the next generation.
Daniel Lim_1E4_(8) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:44 am
WARMTH
W-Wherever i am, I think of that place,
A-Awaits to reach there as soon as possible,
R-Ready to enjoy lots of fun there,
M-Magical discovery awaits there,
T-Time, lots of time maybe lost there, but it is worth spending,
H$-Home, is the place filled with warmth and cosiness.
I like the poem on magician because it relates to to personality of a magician.
All the poems are very interesting!!
M.A said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:50 am
M.A (24) 1E1
Hat
Help us protect from the sun
And rain too
This object nice to wear too
I like the poem about Chaos because it is true that humans are not their usual self when they panic.
Cmtc said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:50 am
CMTC(6)1E4
HOPE
High above the clouds where blue birds fly,
Over the rainbow where thousands of colours shine,
Peoples’ wishes that weighs a millon pounds hung,
Ever waiting to be granted.
I also like the poem’Angel’ by Melissa.I think it is very meaningful.
mr c-k-y 6 1e1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:53 am
Music
makes people relax
using the melody of its
sweet little thing which soothe’s people’heart
ideal thing to do when you are bored
chasing the dreams of my becoming a musician
Ryan Ng said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:53 am
O- open sea
C- calm whan met with dangers
E- eternity(will always have) / exellent view of marine life
A- adventures assured
N- navigation is required
aMiRa_1e5_1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:58 am
Elmo
Elmo is a
Lovable, cute and furry
Monster who is
On Every Kid’s minds..
________________________________________________________________
Love, this one’s dedicated to my all my friends…=DD
Love Is Complicated Emotion
One Which Nobody Can Explain, But It Is
Vivacious And Present In
Everyone’s Hearts
Ryan Ng_1e3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:59 am
Sry I didn’t include my poem name,
Its OCEAN.
Bredan’s EARTH is great! He clearly stated whta we should do for our mother Earth.Grats!
Ryan Ng_1e3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:59 am
Sry I didn’t include my poem name,
Its OCEAN.
Bredan’s EARTH is great! He clearly stated what we should do for our Mother Earth.Grats!
OSY (30) sec 1e4 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:00 am
BANNED
B- bearing it all
A- always banned
N- NO computer
N- NO handphone
E- everything in suspense
D- don’t always control it all
I like the poem math best as it is very interesting and sometimes I feel the same way.
1e3 student said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:01 am
i dun understand how do i post the poem….
mr c-k-y 6 1e1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:01 am
i like my one
Sheng Yang. said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:02 am
REBORN
Reincarnation.
Easy.
Born into a new life.
Obese becomes slim.
Regain a new hope.
No problems cannot be solved.
I think it makes no sense .
mr c-k-y 6 1e1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:02 am
sheng yang where r u?
1e3 student said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:02 am
i dun under stand about how to post the poem…
Gladys Chua said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:04 am
oops Li Ying’s post should be #75…
James...1E5....swiss... said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:06 am
WARCRAFTW- War violence everywhereA- Always have beings killedR- Really addictive to we peopleC- Can also make people do silly thingsR- Rage and terror roams the lands A- Apart from violence and anything else F- Far and wide items are found,skills are masteredT- To satisfy your heart’s desire!
- zhuueenn {: said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:07 am
LZE (21) Sec 1E5
C – an’t resist ‘em !
H – eavenly yummy !
O – ften, it’s a gift to show
C – aring for one another. Awwww …
O – utstanding ! Give a medal to the person who invented it !
L – ove it !
A – nd treasure
T – he best candy
E – ver made
I like the poem on Freedom by Mrs.V because it makes me feel that I’m really free by just imagining it, as it clearly describes it.
And the words used are also very creative and cool !
mr c-k-y 6 1e1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:09 am
i likemy one very much
Declan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:13 am
E-Everyone’s home
A-All of us should do a part in preventing global warming
R-Reuse,reduce,recycle
T-Time for us to do our part
H-Hope for the future generations
.:lIyAANA_1E5_(26) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:22 am
here’s a poem on LOVER:
L:Love is sometihng that everyone will enjoy
O:Ordinary it is when it comes to teenagers
V: Very interested in finding their lovers
E: Everyone craves for it but…
R:Remember, it is not the time yet and studies is the number one piority
I like the one on FLOORBALL. Its describes the actual situation during the game. Very inspiring for floorball players…..
Kang Ming said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:23 am
LKM(21),1E4
CAFE
Comfy
And relaxing place
Foods are delicious
Expensive
I like the poem about the soccer as it says everything that is true about soccer and i also like soccer.
Irtiyah said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:25 am
sorry, i got a typing error.
It’s actually “bands of colours” not “bend of colours”
please take not
thanks
JESLYN♥ said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:25 am
JLXY (13) , Sec 1E4
—————————————————————————————————–
CHOCOLATE ;
C-Came near to me, made me tempted
H-However bitter it is, it’s simply addictive
O-Only this can cure depression ,
C-Crawling back to you,
O-Once you had your first try .
L-Love the taste, the feeling of it.
A-A wonderful candy with different flavours to it,
T-Thick, dark and melting in my mouth
E-Everlasting sensation in my tougue .
—————————————————————————————————
Denise ;
D-Don’t wanna lose you as a friend
E-Everyday, everywhere, every moment, every second thinking of our memories
N-Nobody can ever replace you
I-I will protect you from everyone, everything
S-Sweet in your own unique style,
E-Everlasting friendship is all I wish for.
Dedicated to : Denise Teh 1E4, my beloved friend
—————————————————————————————————–
I like Melissa’s poem on “Angel” as it really decribes an angel and about an angel i have in mind.
Jolin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:26 am
Jolin Ong Jing Wen (27) 1E5
KEY
K: keep it with you
E: especially when
Y: you go out
I really like the poem on home because that is how i feel about home . Its really interesting to read it.
mr c-k-y 6 1e1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:29 am
i really really like m one
Gary(Cap'n Bob Hatchetback) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:30 am
Whoever?!
N-National Cadet Corps;
C-Creating ou future,
C-Controlling our pain,
A-Ascending to greater heights,
I-In our lovable squadron,
R-Rocking in power!
I like SCHOOL as i totally agree with it, go for IT!
Chan Wei Ci_1E5_(4) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:30 am
People uses it to write
Especially for drawing
Need to be handled with care
Can be broken
In the wrong hands, it can be dangerous
Long or short, it is still useful
cloneeee said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:33 am
MYP(21)sec 1e3
RECESS
Run!
Everybody!
Cut the queues!
Eat the foods!
Salvage the canteen and….
Stack the food up into mountain!
I hav nothign to write in the end so must make up something,….i like hani ’s poem cuz its very discriptive and funny^_^.
Lee Yoke Mun said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:33 am
I like SitiNabila’s poem as it was true.
NIKKI
Not demanding or selfish
Is always around for her friends
Kind and helpful
Keen in everything she does
Is beautiful inside and outside
Ada(1E5)3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:35 am
Laugh
Laughters spread
And never stop
Use to brighten up your life
Give you happiness
Have a laugh
Aqillah said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:39 am
NABA(27)Sec 1E3
FRIENDS
Friend are there
Right when you need them
In good and bad times
Enjoying the excitement with each other
Never get bored
Doing things together
Staying true and close to each other forever
I actually don’t know what to write. So i came out with this topic.
Anyway i liked the poems that my friends have posted. Everything was great!
Gary(Cap'n Bob Hatchetback) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:42 am
Whoever is actually Gary(Cap’n Bob Hatchetback)
1-E2 (13)
E-Eagle Eye, the name to remember
A-Agonizing everything in its way
G-Going for greater dreams
L-Locking targets on victims
E-entertaining themselves
E-Elevating through levels
Y-Yachting into currents
E-Eradicating the source
♥ `NICOLETTE :D said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:45 am
NN, 27, 1E1
Dedicated to XinYing aka Polkadotted Froggy.
XINYING
eXtremely cute, funny and kind
Interesting, she never bores
‘N Happy Birthday to you, XinYing!
You are the one who makes us laugh
In your own unique way
Nevertheless, she’s everyone’s friend
o God, please bless this girl.
130396 ♥ ` Happy Birthday!
Seah Chang wee_1E2_23 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:45 am
wow so many people and so many poems
XinYing (31) 1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:49 am
Dedicated to Nicolette a.k.a WOOLLY MAMMOTH
Nicolette
Nice girl
Intelligent
Comical
Optimistic
Loved by all
Exceedingly sociable
Thoughtful
Turns hyper suddenly sometimes
Extremely active
♥ `NICOLETTE :D said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:49 am
NN, 27, 1E1
Dedicated to XinYing, da Polkadotted Froggy.
XINYING
eXtremely cute, funny and kind
Interesting, she never bores
‘N Happy Birthday to you, XinYing!
You are the one who makes us laugh
In your own unique way
Nevertheless, she’s everyone’s friend
o God, please bless this girl.
130396 ♥ ` Happy Birthday!
MNZR(25) 1E1 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:52 am
LIFE
Living in terror and
In agony while
Finding the right time to get
Emotional when life gets too extreme
I really love the poem MATH because it truly reflects what learning MATH is like.
JPJX_1E2_(15) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:52 am
CANS
Can contain items which are wet
And protects the thing inside
Never allowed damages to be made
Serves its owner with top priority
The poems here are great!
Sora said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:53 am
LTS (22) 1E4
SWORD
Slices things easily
Wield carefully otherwise a double edged weapon
Often used to hurt
Right “gift” for an enemy
Dangerous if not carefully wield
Well out of the all the poems the one with deepest impression is the “WOMEN” as it is very funny. >.<
Muhd Luqman (25) 1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 2:55 am
SCHOOL
S-study, study, study
C-come back home with a bunch of homework
H-holiday!When are you coming?
O-open our brains for new knowledge
O-onwards we go to achieving our goals
L-laugh out loud with freinds
I like LIFE written by Jonas although it is shrot and simple it has a deep meaning
Someone said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:01 am
MDS 25 1E4
I like the freedom poem.It show waht freedom should be.
insomnia
Is trying to sleep but
Not able to sleep
Someone might try to help you to sleep
Others wont
Maybe you will sleep
Next time but
In the end you will definitely sleep
After you consult a doctor that is
KL said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:04 am
JL (14) 1E4
FIRE
Flame caused by burning
Is dangerous if no handled properly
React with sulphur
Easily get burned if you play with it
Mrs V, i do not have an e-mail address.
Choong Ming Hwee said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:07 am
CMH (7) 1E5
BUS
Big and long
Utilities for people
Send us to where we want to go
I like the poem ‘floorball’. I think the poem is very meaningful, lively, well-constructed and the words used to interpret floorball was appropriate.
Sora said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:07 am
LTS (22) 1E4
SWORDS
Slices things easily
Wield carefully otherwise a double edged weapon
Often used to hurt
Right “gift” for an enemy
Dangerous if not carefully wield
No comments
KL said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:10 am
JL (14) 1E4
FIRE
Flame caused by burning
Is dangerous if no handled properly
React with sulphur
Easily get burned if you play with it
The e-mail i anyhow type as i have no e-mail
Sora said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:14 am
LTS (22) 1E4
SWORD
Slices things easily
Wield carefully otherwise a double edged weapon
Often used to hurt
Right “gift” for an enemy
Dangerous if not carefully wield
anthony said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:25 am
KYWA ( 14 ) , 1e1
DOG
D – Dancing is a passion.
O – Oh doggy, dance for me!
G – Good doggy!
Vignesa Pasupathy said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:31 am
STRENGTH
Sharing
Teamwork together to get
Ready for the worst to
Embark on by
Not giving up and
Go for achievement with
Tactics and be
Humble
I like th poem about peace as it states the way peace is created
Nikki Koh said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:33 am
I like Irtiya`s poem as it is meaningful and describes the weather nowadays.
CLOUDS
Cheers us up in the clear blue sky
Lovely and very much beautiful
Overlooking us from high above
Under the limitless height of the marvelous sky
Day and night without fail
Something that can be seen but not reachable
KUMARESA PASUPATHY said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:37 am
STRESS
Stop
Take some time to
Relax and
Exercise
So as to
Survive
I like the poem on Strength as it shows the determination.
OTW(30),sec 1e4 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:43 am
STARFALL
S-shining bright and proudly
T-teeming with life
A-arriving on earth
R- Roaming in the sky
F-falling into my hands
A-appearing to be tired
L-leveling in the air
L-leaving to its own home
Vignesa Pasupathy said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:46 am
STRENGTH
Sharing
Teamwork togeter to get
Ready for the worst to
Embark on by
Not giving up and
Go for achievement with
Tactics and be
Humble
Amogh said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:51 am
Wow great poems full of meaning especially the one on magic loved it.
DNg 1E1 (11) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:52 am
This is not well-written, but it is all i can think of…
UPSET
Under her smile
Pretending to be happy
She cries in her heart
Except when no one is around
Then tears will well up in her eyes
Amogh said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:56 am
Sorry, i did not post the poem ,
So fun so cool
Creativity or mundanity
Here lies
Our
Own
Learning haven
(wow i made such a nice poem in seconds)
Joel said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:59 am
JWSJ (17) 1e5
SUN
So high up in the sky
Usually bright during afternoon
Not available during night time
i like the one on PEN because it really says about what the pen does
♥} XinHui said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:01 am
Sec 1e2, ( 22 )
Huiyu`욱 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:05 am
M-mean
E-easily seduced
N-not gentlemen
W-win all the guy’s heart
O-open-minded
M-maid for men
E-essential to men
N-nice and wonderful
KSH said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:17 am
KSH (17), Sec 1E4
HOMELAND
Home sweet home,
Only home in earth,
Me and the peoples,
Eliminate our enemies.
Laziness does not exist
As the people care for their homeland.
Never had we surrendered,
Didn’t we promise that united we stand?
I like FLOORBALL by Ying Jie as he wrote about his experience in floorball and the exciting parts when you are playing floorball. It is also very creative and fresh
-SNOWY--x said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:22 am
WXL (38), SEC 1E4
FRIENDSHIP
Friends that i need
Really care for rme
Initially met as strangers
Everything is so worth it
Nothing can separate us
Did wrong, they teach me
Sad, they comfort me
Happy always when together
In times when we succeed
Past are always memorable
I like the poem STARS because it is very interesting, as the beginning was talking about how the stars shine all night, and suddenly they are gone when we want to pick them.
KSH said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:23 am
KSH (17), Sec 1E4
NPCC
National Police Cadet Corps
Protects the citizens like the police
Catching criminals are our jobs
Confirm no good life for the criminals
jesleen said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:27 am
JSMY (14) 1E3
Original
Originality produces the freshest idea
Reign the space around you with creativity
Independent development of ideas
Get fun out of the process
Infinite ideas you could actually have
Nothing is impossible
As long as you think out of the box
Likable your idea could actually be even if you do not think it to be.
I like the poem on mothers because it describes mothers vividly as in how they loved and cared selflessly for their children.
TanYihanGlenn_1E4(34) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:36 am
COOL!
Word: SECONDARY 1E 4
S-Sexy!
E-Enthusiastic!
C-Cooperative!
O-Open-minded!
N-Nice!
D-Democratic!
A-Attractive!
R-Retrospective!
Y-Yummy!
1-1derful(wonderful)!
E-Energetic!
4- 4eva Friends(Forever Friends)!
-From TanYihan, Glenn
JSMW(14) sec 1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:36 am
People eat it
It’s delicious
Edible
I like Bill’s poem as it is simple and easy and has creative description on pens
Melvin Liow said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:37 am
Friends
Friends are forever
Right from the start
I will never
Ever get into a fight with them
Not even once in my life
Days after days we are
Still the same being best FRIENDS!
All the poems are quite. I wish I have the whole list if them!
chia wan rui said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:52 am
Friends
Forever as one
Reaching for goals
Independent we stand
Each other who we care for
Doing what is right
Striving to achieve our goals
chia wan rui said,
March 13, 2009 @ 4:56 am
sorry i forgot to write my class. i from 1E5 (6)
JiaMin said,
March 13, 2009 @ 5:10 am
PJM_29_1E3
MONKEY
Moving in the wide jungle,
Outside swinging from vines to trees,
Nibbling on a banana while having a sleep,
Keeping its balance on the tree,
Eating fresh fruit and bananas,
Yelling and screaming all day long.
Chua Yi Chian said,
March 13, 2009 @ 6:23 am
CYC (8), Sec 1E5
RAIN
Raining cats and dogs, tapping on the window pane
And hammered steadily on the roof
In the middle of the night,
Night became cold, I hope everyone will have a dream as sweet as honey
I like the poem about Moon as it portrays the moon at night, the desriptions used are suitable and it is quite true and the poem and the real moon in the sky at night are quite similar, thus showing its reality.
xin jian,said said,
March 13, 2009 @ 6:33 am
txj(30),1E2
GAME
G-Good for relexation
A-Addicted to it
M-Many are interesting
E-Everyone would love it
mrsv said,
March 13, 2009 @ 8:20 am
These are all WONDERFUL poems! I will be checking off your names on my list so that I know who has written in (and can go chasing after the ones who haven’t!). And then when I have time, I am going to read these again and really savour them. It looks like you had fun playing with the words and finding the right ones to fit what you wanted to say. This is a job well done!
xy said,
March 13, 2009 @ 8:35 am
EXY (09), Sec 1E5
DEATH
Departure of the living
Eternal farewell to loved ones
And put to sleep amongst the corpses
Terrifying as it is
Help, I am falling into abyss!
I like the poem on Panther because gives a PANTHER because it gives a good description on the panther and its prey. A good range of words used.
HAQ(13)1E5 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 8:42 am
HEROS
Here for everyone
Everlasting courage
Roar till the end
Only to help people
Super power
I like the poem on NPCC by KSH as it talks about the spirits of the police force
which I totally agree with.I feel that if all policemen believe in this,there will be
lesser and lesser of crime happening.
Lim JingQi (1E4) said,
March 13, 2009 @ 9:14 am
Glamorous
Glamour is what every girl seek for .
Looking for something which not all can have
Aiming for something out of reach ,
Miss , please get back to the reality
Open your eyes and see , that
Reality is cruel and harsh
Open your eyes
Understand what world you’re living in
Stop dreaming of being glamorous ’cause not all girl can be .
i like the poem by yimin from 1e5 as i think the poem makes sense ^^
Choonzin (: said,
March 13, 2009 @ 9:21 am
TanChoonZin – 32 – 1e3 .
Sister .
S – She’s the that knows me best
I – I look at her and tell her that
S – Aviour in my punishments
T – that lasts long after hours
E – Even though i tell her i hate her when we quarrel
R – Really , i don’t mean it .
i like the poem on FRIENDSHIP by -SNOWY–x as it really spells out how friendship can be .
Choonzin (: said,
March 13, 2009 @ 9:22 am
ahh , the S is the beginning should be – she’s the one that knows me best . lol
Eleanor ;P said,
March 13, 2009 @ 10:10 am
EK (9) 1E2
Piano
Plays a mesmerizing tune
It’ll take you to another world
And changes the way you feel
No one will understand the feeling
Only you will know it inside
Poem about KEYS.
Cause i constantly forget to bring my key along.
Regan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 10:11 am
NYKR(24),Sec 1E3
PLAY
P-playing games
L-Learning at the same time
A-Attractive
Y-Yes!
Regan said,
March 13, 2009 @ 10:12 am
NYKR(24),Sec 1E3
I like to read the acrostic poems here because it is all interesting.
fwj(11),1E2 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 11:40 am
SEA
Some animals live there
Every one of them
Are unique
Guo Xingru (11) 1E4 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:03 pm
Title: Flute
Fluttering sentences people said when a song is played
Longing for a flutist that will bring melodies alive
Us brought away by the emotions of the music
Tough and long journey the flutist had to go through to the complete mastering of skills
Even the hardship that needs to be gone through could not stop people from being passionate for the melodious instrument
I like the poem ‘Independence Day’ by Mrs V. It tells people clearly about what it had wanted to express, and the words used has also best described the situation and emotions of people during the time.
ZANN :D said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:13 pm
ZTXY(40)1E5
Shining in the dark sky
That everyone knows
A very significant thing,
Reaching everyone’s minds
i like NICOLETTE&XINYING’s 0ne,as it is dedicated to friendship.
&&HappyBirthday,Xinying!(withloveszc)
WJW(38)1e3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:43 pm
(Cats) C-comfortable to pat A-active and playful T-talks by meows S-small and cute! P.S. Stingray,It’s P-L-A-N-E-T not PLANT! Weird,I liked the poems on death.
WJW(38)1e3 said,
March 13, 2009 @ 1:46 pm
Great ideas!I also liked the poem on friends as well.
r said,
March 13, 2009 @ 3:02 pm
ay,(05),sec1e1
friends
Friends,people you hang ot with
Running everywhere with them.
I can never live withiut them
Even though they can be irritating at times,
No matter what, friends are friends.
Different, they might be,
Still they will be your friends.
i think dat de poem on friendship by madeline is very nice
DKIID said,
March 14, 2009 @ 4:34 am
I also like the one about men and women by Hui Yu cuz it is very interesting and it is also quite true, in a way.
zj(15)1E1 said,
March 14, 2009 @ 7:59 am
PARK
Place to excercise
Area where there is plants
Running and jogging
Keep the place clean
Celeste(2) 1E4 said,
March 14, 2009 @ 10:35 am
CCXQ,2,1E4
Friends
Forever by your side,
Reliable too.
In fact,they are loyal, and
even caring
Never complaining at all,
denying the worst things,
suggesting the bst things…
sharon_1e5_11 said,
March 15, 2009 @ 5:31 am
FRIENDS
Friends are special
Reaching out and giving you that extra hand
Inside your heart forever
Enjoy each others company
Never a bully to another
Doing everything they can when you are in need
Share secrets
Vanisri said,
March 16, 2009 @ 9:25 am
sleep
sound and safe
lying on a nice bed
extremely relaxed
extremely comfortable
perfect with cool air
i liked the poems on friends by sharon from 1 e5. i like it because it is really about what a friend is.
CJL(3)1E4 said,
March 17, 2009 @ 1:54 pm
Basketball
B-Best to play
A-Active game
S-Slimming your body
K-Kids to play
E-Energetic
T-Thrilling
B-Best of all
A-Aromatic
L-Liven
L-LORD of all sports
Darren 1E5 (19) said,
March 21, 2009 @ 2:50 am
Time
Ticks away
Impatient
Minutes pass
Every second is precious
Darren 1E5 (19) said,
March 21, 2009 @ 2:54 am
I like Shuan 1E5 poem as it is true that most people need to prepare for the exams
Eunice said,
March 21, 2009 @ 3:15 am
Maths
M-aths, how I hate maths
A-lgebra, Integers, Ratio, Rate, Percentages…
T-here is so much to learn!
H-ad I learn them faster
S-omeday I will not have trouble with them
QSJ (29) Sec 1E1 said,
March 22, 2009 @ 9:56 pm
Provide you with comfort and needs
Accompany you when you are lonely
Reach out their hands for you
Enriched you with knowledge
Never-ending love for you
Teach you the right codes and conducts
Special companions that we must cherished
jake said,
March 31, 2009 @ 12:21 am
can some1 please tel me a acrostic poem for sting rays thankyou
Marinela said,
May 13, 2009 @ 6:50 pm
Acrostic and Haiku
COW
Call me horrid names
Obviously not that loved
Working hard always
meme said,
May 26, 2009 @ 10:16 pm
awesome but needs a poem about freedom
mrsv said,
May 27, 2009 @ 11:08 am
Check comment number 15. Been there. Done that!
Jonas Hii said,
June 13, 2009 @ 8:41 am
here =D
E – Extravagant landforms
A – Animals in the pastures
R – Rotating while no one cares
T – The cause of nights and days
H – How people tend to forget
Shanny said,
September 25, 2009 @ 1:09 am
Can some one help me with an acoustic poem with the name Melissa. It for my sister. I want to recite it at her baby shower.